LOL well to the right (or left) there should be a box that says image links and if you click the direct link, then paste it into your navigational bar, it should take you directly to the photo and THEN you can save it :)
What!? Absolutely not, terrible character, total Mary Sure, how dare she call herself a Bleach character!
Wait! Don't run away! I'm kidding! Its very indepth, which I love, and from what I've read (I read in short bursts as I tend to be very easily distracted <_< ) she seems to be well developed, I'm not usually a fan of inserts into canon, though I will say I like this one as its not overdone.
Haha... Well, now that you mention it, I have been a critic for a couple years, and, according to Star Wars RPers and RPers on Gaia Online, I seem to be quite good at it. If you want I can dive into a few of your characters and nitpick them to oblivion. :P
Well her idol/love interest/epic friend just died. She saw Yoruichi naked and is still straight. And if whoever killed Susumu is still there, well, she's having a horrible moment for some emotional breakdown.
3) But the known Zero Division folks are a Yakuza, a fat monk, a fat rich woman, and legitimately cool lookin' woman. ZERO DIVISION IS CLEARLY MENTALLY SCREWED / AS ABOUT AS UNDERWHELMING AS THE VANDENREICH!
Technically though you could still use the image and the name, unless the character's personalities are the same or their histories coincide with one another, I wouldn't really call it a crossover. But I dun make the rules, I just break follow 'em. :D
Well its not the promised tomorrow or a morning for that matter, but here's the first critique: Lyon Harribel.
It might sound kind of harsh, it might not, I'm a bad judge at that personally but its not intended to be offensive. And you never wanted me to start off anywhere specific, excepting maybe the Crimson Lotus, but reading that step-by-step I haven't seen anything wrong with that barring that one, totally serious, life or death missing word. So I picked this randomly out of yer category page.
Well sure, but the only problem is, there isn't much that makes her not Harribel. She fits Tier's mold pretty much to a T, only that she's stronger yet somehow in the crappier position (Not counting being chained somewhere as Juhabach's implied hollow-maker). I mean you could slap on an entirely different name to her, and she's still pretty much by Tier Harribel de-saturated.
And I seem to have an immense habit of using italics today. >.>
Yeah :DD Thanks for your help though. I've actually been meaning to redo the most of Lyon, but I've been really busy with schoolwork and that, so I haven't been able to get to it. Even on the weekends, I have a lot to do.
Lumis is My OC from a rp, why did you leav that message on my profile saying i should correct my information. Its not for you to tell me what Lumia should or should not be about. Sorry to say that but dont do that again please. i may be takeing it the wrong way but telling me to edit my information or my page will be gone in a few days is harsh by any means...have a good night
Uh, you might wanna actually read the manual of style. When we say it's in violation of the latter, we're saying that the format of the page is very disorganized, and needs to be fixed, or else, it will be deleted. We don't have any use for pages that no one can hardly make out.
not being mean or rude i was just asking why he said this about my rpc im curious, i felt very kinda upset in teh same way i said its not ment to be in a harsh or rude tone. i was slightly irritated i all.
If you referred to the manual of style, and read it (as I have like a million times T^T) you would know what needed to be changed. The article needs an infobox and it needs the right format in place as well. The following headers should be used, if applicable:
Shiva is the NAME of the FFX Side Character for Yuna to use. Therefore, its a violation of Crossover rules in our Manual Style for this stie. No hard feelings, I'm just doing my job as Admin Lieutenant
Wouldn't that be...redundant? O.o 13 MORE Military Divisions serving underneath 13 Divisions serving underneath the Central 46 Courts of the Seireitei? Wouldn't it be better to make something a little more...original? >.<
I'm sorry :( I just didn't know if these Units had a purpose beyond just ordinary Gotei 13 duties, or if they were selected "Special Case" Soul Reapers that'd undertake secret operations or suicide tasks! Please forgive me! ;(
No prob. You are good to go on Storm. And I noticed that you and Mangetsu are Naruto fans. I have a character Hikaku Jiryōku, that I need to develop. You guys want to come over and make a team there too?
Maybe. I was once a multi-tasker on Multiple Roleplaying Forums on FF, but it became too much and eventually too stressful. I'll try and see if I can work to motivate myself to get on that Wiki, I just don't know how to start myself up out in the blue of NFF X3
Those are pretty awesome Mal. If you can make it Mangetsu, that is fine because I know what you mean about multi-tasking. I created Young Justice Legacy Wiki, I am an admin on Naruto Fanon Wiki, and I am a new user on this wiki. :P