Severino's portrayal[]
Much better than your previous attempt, Black. Of course, I think there could be a closer portrayal, but that's only a flaw because I was not the one writing his actions, rather than a problem on your part. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 18:09, 12 May 2009 (UTC)
Gee thanks Lavi..... I think o_O
Blackemo1 14:20, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
- It was meant as a compliment. I'm always blunt when it comes to critiquing. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 03:24, 17 May 2009 (UTC)